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Introduce Yourself / Re: Welp, guess I'm here now
Last post by fireflygoddess - December 08, 2019, 08:23:56 pm
glad to see someone new and welcome to the(mostly abandonded) site deary
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Introduce Yourself / Re: Welp, guess I'm here now
Last post by Pleb with a Pen - December 07, 2019, 12:37:36 pm
Greetings! It's very nice to see someone new around here. It's true that there hasn't been any action recently, but we can change that.
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Introduce Yourself / Re: Welp, guess I'm here now
Last post by Frest - December 07, 2019, 12:17:54 pm
I hop on every now and then, just to see how things are. Hopefully, we can get more people to join.
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Introduce Yourself / Re: Welp, guess I'm here now
Last post by That one guy from earlier - December 07, 2019, 08:45:24 am
Howdy! This place is a little bit abandoned right now but I think there are still two people around including myself.
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Introduce Yourself / Welp, guess I'm here now
Last post by Naitoshadou - December 05, 2019, 10:06:08 pm
Hi, some of you might remember me from Hyun's Dojo

This seems like a fun place, let's try it out!
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Exploits / Re: City Building Event
Last post by That one guy from earlier - October 22, 2019, 04:40:34 pm
Quote from: Pleb with a Pen on October 22, 2019, 04:15:52 pmTwo weeks passed already, huh? Sorry for not responding earlier(again). I agree it's pretty sad that no one responded for so long. I guess we can go out searching for another writing forum?

Anyway, I finally got around reading all of your story and I gotta say, I am surprised at how in depth you went and I really like it. There are mainly two things stuck out to me. First, the combination of Gothic architecture and bright and blue colours(like in greek islands). It's not negative, it just was kinda hard for me to visualise. Second, the size of your city and all the places/areas are impossible to exist  together. Your city is simply too small to have slums for example, unless something went extremely wrong which I find unlikely. I live in a city of a bit more of 10k people and we barely have two hotels which are nothing special. I suggest you add another digits on that resident count.

I also underlined a point where I believe you made a mistake in using both south and north for the Serada mountain range, although this can be my mistake in understanding.
It's only supposed to be north of the mountain range. Good catch. And as for the city size, I never was good with demographic realism. You make very good points.

Anyways, thank you for replying when nobody else did. I reckon this forum is officially dead as a doornail. It's kinda sad really because I literally made a conscious effort to be active here. Anyways, thank you.
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Exploits / Re: City Building Event
Last post by Pleb with a Pen - October 22, 2019, 04:15:52 pm
Two weeks passed already, huh? Sorry for not responding earlier(again). I agree it's pretty sad that no one responded for so long. I guess we can go out searching for another writing forum?

Anyway, I finally got around reading all of your story and I gotta say, I am surprised at how in depth you went and I really like it. There are mainly two things stuck out to me. First, the combination of Gothic architecture and bright and blue colours(like in greek islands). It's not negative, it just was kinda hard for me to visualise. Second, the size of your city and all the places/areas are impossible to exist  together. Your city is simply too small to have slums for example, unless something went extremely wrong which I find unlikely. I live in a city of a bit more of 10k people and we barely have two hotels which are nothing special. I suggest you add another digits on that resident count.

I also underlined a point where I believe you made a mistake in using both south and north for the Serada mountain range, although this can be my mistake in understanding.
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Exploits / Re: City Building Event
Last post by That one guy from earlier - October 21, 2019, 06:04:06 pm
Well, after our pathetic crawl to the finish line climatic battle, it looks like we tied. Congratulations.
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General Discussion / Re: BST General Discussion
Last post by Breckenridge - October 17, 2019, 06:48:15 am
Quote from: FurrySlime on August 08, 2019, 07:53:38 pmFor all you forum phantoms out there, I removed Samael because he was too complicated. I'll still complete the battle between him and Jump, and add that to the Tales of Light and Shadow.

I'll replace him with a gladiator pair that are much simpler for me to write with.

What do you mean by Samael being complicated btw?
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Exploits / Re: City Building Event
Last post by That one guy from earlier - October 16, 2019, 10:36:59 am
This is legit the reason why I left the previous forum. The forum was a ghost town and a selfish part of me wanted to write a story that I thought at least some people would read. Even if it were just 1 or 2 people. Oh well, I guess.

You did really well I think and you certainly merged the various topics of the city together better than I think I did. I don't really have much to critique about your city really. I suppose some specifics would have been nice in terms of the city's overall infrastructure and hot spots (you mentioned a monument and a military compound but I think that's it or at least that's all I can remember since I read this the day it came out) but other than that you did a fine job.
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